Month: June 2016

i think paragraph 4 is the most powerful one because the corkasian girls  face was all over the news (one person) and the papers but 35 mexican/black girls went missing and not one of the was on the news

Ben, who is 12 years old , has freckles, is caucasian and  is about 4ft tall. One terribly unlucky day, he went to the fun fair on his own. He had nearly no friends; only three main friends: Charlotte, Bradley and James, who didn’t have enough money to go with him. They also thought it was a bad idea because they knew the annual funfair at Norgress Park was always so crowded and towards the end of the day there were always gang fights. So Ben went anyways. What Ben didn’t know is that the terrorists had loosened the funfair’s carts at the warehouse: Ben’s friends tried to warn him, but  Ben had left  his phone at the cotton candy stands. But then he realised he lost his phone.The shock startles him. He went back but it was gone; well, that’s why you shouldn’t have your brand new iPhone SE out  in the open, he thought to himself. So he tried to find it by using the Find Your iPhone app. There it was! Guess what, the gangsters had it.So Ben went to go find the gangsters. Ben had found them. They had knives and guns. Ben went to go find the park ranger, who had all sorts of gear like guns, batons and  tasers.